Poem
More unique than the average,
But pricier than most,
Simple and professional,
Compatible with others,
While still standing out and being one of a kind
Right beside you when you need it,
All around yet small enough to contain,
But specializing in certain areas better than others,
Versatile and accessorized,
Living up to it’s name
Allowing others to look at your contents,
Freely and open ended,
Taking safety first,
With a rock hard structure,
And transparent outer layer
Having the ability to connect with 3rd parties,
Quicker than a blink of the eye,
Reliable when there is a lot of pressure,
Built for any situation that comes my way,
I am a gopro hero 4 and unlike any other
I love your metaphor! The poem was nice and I could clearly see how the gopro related to you in most of your lines.
ReplyDeleteBut some lines needed a bit of explanation like "quicker than a blink of the eye" or "taking safety." Other than fixing some lines, your poem was very nice and connected you and the gopro well.
I love your metaphor! The poem was nice and I could clearly see how the gopro related to you in most of your lines.
ReplyDeleteBut some lines needed a bit of explanation like "quicker than a blink of the eye" or "taking safety." Other than fixing some lines, your poem was very nice and connected you and the gopro well.
I like how you were able to describe your metaphor in many different ways, such as using vocabulary words, and explaining the object you compared yourself to. Your poem also sounds like a story which made it a little more entertaining. Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem, it's an attention getter.
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