What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? I enjoyed your writing on the seasons. In it you painted a very descriptive picture of Spring where I could clearly taste, touch, smell, see and hear Spring along with you. I actually remember the birthday party that you referred to in your writing. Great job!
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? I enjoyed reading both your articles and your reflections. If there's one area that I would like to see you improve on, it would be your grammar, specifically your sentence structure and use of punctuations. That being said, I could follow your ideas and definitely think you're headed in the right direction. Keep up the great work! I'm really proud of you! Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? I really like the ideas you come up with for your writing and that you're writing in a more natural, conversational style. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? As I mentioned earlier, keep working on your grammar. Also, I noticed in your farming story that you seem to imply that all local farmers follow organic practices, and I don't think that's necessarily true...but I may be wrong. So, be sure the check your facts when writing those kinds of pieces.
Ky, overall great work thus far. I really enjoyed reading your stories. Keep up the great work! I'm really proud of you!
What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your writing on the seasons. In it you painted a very descriptive picture of Spring where I could clearly taste, touch, smell, see and hear Spring along with you. I actually remember the birthday party that you referred to in your writing. Great job!
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
I enjoyed reading both your articles and your reflections. If there's one area that I would like to see you improve on, it would be your grammar, specifically your sentence structure and use of punctuations. That being said, I could follow your ideas and definitely think you're headed in the right direction. Keep up the great work! I'm really proud of you!
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
I really like the ideas you come up with for your writing and that you're writing in a more natural, conversational style.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
As I mentioned earlier, keep working on your grammar. Also, I noticed in your farming story that you seem to imply that all local farmers follow organic practices, and I don't think that's necessarily true...but I may be wrong. So, be sure the check your facts when writing those kinds of pieces.
Ky, overall great work thus far. I really enjoyed reading your stories. Keep up the great work! I'm really proud of you!